Target audience feedback for pitch

We decided to gain feedback for our pitch from our target audience. We asked two girls who fitted in with the indie genre and had an interest in it. Both of them are 17 therefore fitting in with our targeted age.




We asked them the following questions:
1. Do you feel that our concept is suitable for our target audience? If so why? If not why not?
2. Do you think that our idea is achievable?
3. Do you feel that anything in our pitch is not going to work? Why?
4. Do you think that our clothing and make-up aspects of our music video are appropriate for our genre?
5. What would you expect to see in an indie music video?


The response we got was:
1. They thought the concept is suitable because its similar to other indie music videos and also because you tend to see relationships in indie music videos such as in Ellie Goulding 'How Long will I love you' they thought it was a good idea.

2. Jess thought that our idea is achievable because we are using natural outdoors locations which is stereotypical of the indie genre therefore allowing us to use natural lighting. Rosie said yes, however she thought we might have problems recording in the bad weather due to the use of electrical equipment aswell as the fact we would be filming outdoors the majority of the time.

3. One of the problems that our audience thought might occur is trying to get access to the drama studio due to the possibility of others using it for lessons. Jess thought that gaining permission to use the assembly rooms would be even more of a problem.

4. The answer was yes because it was obvious our choices for clothing have been influenced by other indie artists such as Foxes. Rosie agreed because the clothing we had chosen  is casual which is stereotypical of the indie genre.

5. Jess said she would expect to see a couple together within an indie music video and outdoors locations. We decided our outdoors locations would include by the river, by the castle, within the town, Whitcliffe and Mortimer forest. Rosie said she would expect to see a guitar featured, casual clothing such as jeans and a jumper and again outdoors locations such as in a forest.