Pitch feedback

After presenting our pitch for our indie music video we gained feedback from our class.
The questions we asked are:

1. Do you feel that our concept is suitable for our target audience? If so why? If not why not?
2. Do you think that our idea is achievable?
3. Do you feel that anything in our pitch is not going to work? Why?
4. Do you think that our clothing and make-up aspects of our music video are appropriate for our genre?
5. What would you expect to see in an indie music video?

Here are our class responses:

From looking at the feedback gained from our media class I can see that they thought the concept is suitable for our target audience because it fits the conventions of our genre well and is similar to music videos already available. They also thought it was suitable for our target audience because it contained a female artist.  Our media class also thought that our idea is achievable because it's simple and redundant. When we asked if anything in our pitch wasn't going to work, two people said that it would be quite difficult to get access to the assembly rooms, other than that they thought that our ideas would work. Due to realising that the assembly rooms will be difficult to get permission to use and also because of the fact we would have to pay quite a bit of money we have decided to try and get permission to use the college drama studio stage instead. According to our media group the clothing and make up aspects of our music video are what you'd expect to see in an indie music video and are very simple however too much of a country themed clothing may confuse the genre of indie with country/folk. Our class would expect to see a guitar featuring in our indie music video, a mixture of performance and narrative, an outdoors locations, aspects of a love interest and for the video to be slow paced all of which we have decided to include in our music video due to these features being generic conventions of indie music videos which we found in our research. 

The feedback was useful as it helped to see if our video would fit with the indie genre and also if our idea would work or not, however this feedback is only from our media group and they don't all fit into our chosen target audience and so I will be gaining some more feedback from the target audience.